Sunday 9 December 2018

Junk mail

WALT-write a prediction for what a story might be about based on the given keywords
10/12/18
Green-keyword
Key words
Lili,sick,Ana,delivering  
circulars,buggy,brake,takes,off,streets,mad,bad,worries,paid,lost job
Story :
Lili was sick so Ana helped to deliver circulars.  Ana takes off. She puts the delivery in the buggy. When Ana was on the street the buggy suddenly the  buggy brakes. Ana paid Lili because she had broke the buggy.  Then She lost her job.
The end


WALT- Evaluate  our prediction after reading the story (Junk mail by Prue Hilson,pt 3, no. 3 1995)

The things that we predicted right was Lili was sick so Ana helped to deliver circulars.  The parts that we got wrong is the buggy takes off. She puts the delivery in the buggy. When Ana was on the street the buggy suddenly takes off. Ana paid Lili because she had broke the buggy.  Then She lost her job. After all I give my prediction a 4 out of 10.

Monday 3 December 2018

Where am I describing?


Where am I describing?


In the car park there are lots of people. It’s full of customers of all ages. When you enter the building there are jumbo sized lines of people who are waiting.  When you come in the stage area, you will hear booming noises. As it starts, the crowd cheers and whistles. Suddenly, the wave dance begins and everyone cheer more louder. The public screams and shouts. you can see flags and people a circular structure. you see people waving there are fake grass. the coach on the field whistles and holds the yellow card buzzzzzzz the bell rings the bored shows. Cheerful, cool and loud.
Where am I describing?